Monday, October 24, 2011

Once Upon a Time...

Eliana wrote a great little story while I was helping my sister Jessie and her boyfriend Randy with math today.  Here it is (spelling changed from phonetic to standard):

Once upon a time there was a mysterious mermaid.  She flipped and flopped. Then there was a BOOM! BOOM! BOOM!  She went for that sound, then she saw it was a giant, and it said it was going to eat her up.  "Oh please don't eat me!  I am too little.  I am only eight.  Is there anything for me to help?"

"Well, I have a pokey in my foot.  It makes me to eat persons up."

"I will pull it out."

"Oh thank-you, Mermaid!"

She began to pull it out.

"Ouch!" It was a puncture pokey.  Then, they had a picnic.

The end.

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